TEACHER'S COMMENTS

MARK SO FAR: Planning and Research is still incomplete (planning more than research). Proficient research into similar products and target audience. No real evidence of shotlists, layout and drafting (this is the biggest issue so far). Time management is good. Proficient use of ICT and communication skills. Presentation is high end proficient. Overall 12/20 Room for improvement, especially with planning. on WEBSITES: 'WHAT'S ON'/'EVENTS' PAGE
This contains some good information, but it is very text heavy and would probably be better presented as a Prezi. Good inclusion of Uses and Gratifications theory, but now even more. on METRO: FIRST TWO PAGES Try to include some element of Uses and Gratifications theory. This is particularly important here, because websites are by their very nature something that requires an active audience and people will tend to follow elements based on their specific needs. on WEBSITES: HOME PAGE  Nicely presented and very easy to navigate. Any way of getting more critical theory into this? on WEBSITES: 'WHAT'S ON'/'EVENTS' PAGE       Natasha, It would be nice if you could get some audience theory stuff into this section somewhere... on FOCUS GROUP AND TARGET AUDIENCE